Wednesday, November 4, 2009
RJA #11a: Introduction
Over the past few decades there has been a growing dissatisfaction for how we elect our presidents. The system that was written into our constitution has been challenges repeatedly, but none of the challenges have taken any affect. There are several reasons why citizens have been growing a dislike towards the Electoral College. The Electoral College was set in place by the founders of America because they did want there to be a large majority who controls all political branches, but to give representation to the most people and the states; this electorate system must not be removed from our Constitution.
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Good introduction, maybe have a little more of an attention getter at the beginning and possibly add a little length to it. Otherwise I think that this is a good way to get the reader to start thinking about your topic and you get your argument across effectively.
ReplyDeletegood intro, i agree with Tyler beef it up a little. good as is though
ReplyDeleteI think that you have a good introduction. The only thing I can think of, is that you may want to make your intro longer so then it might be easier to get 12 pages out of this.
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