I like the way you narrowed down the topic and the final question you chose. I might suggest marrying the last two questions in your paper somehow and answering if the system should be in place and what it accomplishes if so and if not addressing what it should accomplish. Otherwise very well done
I like the way you narrowed down the topic and the final question you chose. I might suggest marrying the last two questions in your paper somehow and answering if the system should be in place and what it accomplishes if so and if not addressing what it should accomplish. Otherwise very well done
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